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Through Darkness

By: Elvish Kitty
on Saturday, April 26th 2003 at 11:25pm

Dunno where this came from, but enjoy anyway

Through darkness I strode, in the fullness of a dream, watching wearily the solid black, though I could see nothing. And yet, my steps knew their purpose, and heading, and my legs moved of their own accord, so while even though I could see not a thing, I could walk and be unworried that I would trip.

Wearily still, however, I peered around, hoping that I could discover something that I could see, and perhaps learn of how I came to be in this place, where there is no light. But I could see nothing, hear nothing except a dull echo of my foot steps upon the inky black floor, and could feel nothing except a slight, very slight, breeze from my passing.

And so I walked, into time uncounted, wondering and wandering across a void so profound that even its presence began to weigh heavily on my heart, and my steps - firm until now - falterd, and stopped. I could not move. What had once been a comfortable walk, albiet a weary one, was now sorrow unbound. I felt now tears on my face.

A vision came to me then, in the back of my mind, although I could see nothing through my physical eyes. A vision of a smile, a look, a glint of blonde in weary weather, a laugh and a fond rememberance of a joy long shared, of lying on a hill top and watching clouds drift lazily above, slowly and away, of a hand holding mine...

I remembered now my purpose, to find him on the other side of the darkness. I had forgotten, in my long walk, what it was that I had been looking for, but, now I knew, more deeply than I had ever known, exactly what it was that I had lost. And now had to find.

With a cry that echoed as dully as my footsteps, I lurched forward, breaking into a run. My heart knew now where I had to go, and to that place I ran and never grew weary. Sounds returned to my ears; laughter, tears - waves upon a shore. Feeling returned to my face; a caress, a chaste kiss, hair upon my cheek. Scent returned to me - summer rain and summer fields, and the wind off the ocean. And finally, most wonderfully, sight!

For an instant I was blinded, the deep darkness through which I had come had left my eyes starved for sight, but unused to it. Pain at first, but it was bearable. The brightness faded, and I saw his face, looking down at me from above, and I knew.

Through darkness I had come - and I was Home.

Copyright R. S. McCormick, April 26th, 2003, from now unto eternity.

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Wildman Wrote...

Sunday, April 27th 2003 at 11:00am

wow... beautiful. Potent. I think this is the best thing I've ever read by you and anyone else -- perhaps because you just did it so damned well. I'm mostly speechless right now so I must deliver better praise later when I can describe - as I have just woken up. But don't stop writing ever.

Asrai Wrote...

Monday, April 28th 2003 at 6:22pm

Yes.

Quigley Wrote...

Tuesday, April 29th 2003 at 3:46pm

Obviously you weren't paying much attention in high school...

... or you would not be able to write this well.

Alien Wrote...

Wednesday, April 30th 2003 at 10:27pm

This has a depth of writing that One does not often find. Very different from your reckless-style humour!!
I like. ^_^

Reckon you can write like that for when we eventually write a story together?

Asrai Wrote...

Tuesday, February 27th 2007 at 3:59am

Wow. I just re-read this, after a million (or 4) years, and even though I absolutely loved it when I first read it, I feel like my thoughts then did not give credit where it was due. This is SO amazing.

Elvis Kitty Wrote...

Sunday, September 21st 2008 at 6:46am

This reminded me of a summer I spent in juvi, where the girls had there way with me in the mop room. Much like that experience, the experience of reading this article was awful. Just awful.

Elvish Kitty Wrote...

Sunday, September 21st 2008 at 3:13pm

You'll live.

Asrai Wrote...

Sunday, September 21st 2008 at 3:58pm

Or not. Either way...

Quigley Wrote...

Tuesday, September 23rd 2008 at 10:16pm

The girls had "there" way with you, eh? I see your ineptitude with the English language is more serious than the odd misapplied adjective...

Elvis Kitty Wrote...

Friday, September 26th 2008 at 9:29pm

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lol......did i spell that right?






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